Paradise+ (Yuri) )

[Yuri_Kun]

I don't have really age for them really.. Probably 6-7.. ^^;;

Good that it's cute and fluffy. Maybe I would tone it down a bit when I go back and rewriting it.. I was in small world when I was young.. I see your point and thank you for taking the time to read it. You give me a lot to think about.

[Auro-Cyanide]

No problem. I think Megumi thinking something like 'I love Kokoro! I want to be with her forever and ever' would be enough, or maybe both the kids stating that they want to be together and when they grow up they want to get married. The parents would probably think it was cute and expect the girls to 'grow out of it' once they learn more about the world. Their reactions could possibly be quite different once the girls have grown up depending on what type of character they are.

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[Yuri_Kun]

[Yuri_Kun]

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